Holy Hell
Wow... just wow. That's an amazing story and you did everything well. I liked everything from the jets to the fightscenes and you have some great ideas.
I noticed you used alot of 3d renders in your animation, similiar to how the Fallen Angel Teaser used them. And personally, I think that style made this a great animation. If you could take it one step further and step away from the stick figure style you'll be one hell of an animator.
But either way... I'm looking forward to the next one.